Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Catching the audience: Paper 1-style speech analysis

Link to speech: http://www.nationalcenter.org/AnthonySuffrage.html



In the year 1873, Susan B. Anthony was unjustly arrested and fined for voting in the presidential elections of the previous year in the US. In order to express her feelings of anger and convey her ideals of gender equality to the rest of the population she wrote a speech. Through her speech, she manages to convey the message that women should also be allowed to vote in an effective manner that reaches her intended branch of the population. She accomplishes her goal by using a complex diction, which not only allows her to reach out to the more educated section of the population but also makes her speech more effective by making her look more educated, which gives her ethos. Overall, Anthony manages to create a tone and mood that is extremely serious and credible, which ultimately makes her speech extremely effective.

It is most likely that Anthony’s intended audience when giving out this speech was an adult population of a higher education section while also targeting specifically men. This can be seen primarily in her choice of sophisticated terms which are defined by using uncommon words, such as “ex post facto law,” “disfranchisement” and “odious aristocracy.” Evidence for her targeting of higher education brackets of the population can also be seen in the fact that she references things such as the Federal Constitution and scholars such as Webster, Worcester and Bouvier. The fact that her speech is mostly focused on using logos as a method to appeal to the audience rather than pathos is evidence that her target audience would have most likely been men, since an appeal to emotion would have been more effective for women and men normally tend to find highly logical and direct messages more convincing.

It is possible to see from Anthony’s target audience choice that the purpose of her speech was not to encourage more women to join the gender equality movement; rather her intention was more directed towards the idea of providing a strong argument for the gender equality movement that would resonate in the male population as well. To this intent she uses direct citations from the Federal Constitution and gives a detailed explanation of her argument, which means that she is using very strong logos to persuade her audience. However, her choice of sophisticated words and proof of her knowledge of scholarly figures would also make the audience perceive her as a highly educated member of the population, which gives her a strong ethos through the speech itself.

Despite having a lot of factual based arguments in her speech, Anthony still manages to a tone of ire and sorrow that delivers her message in a passionate way that can resonate with the masses. She does this by using certain rhetorical devices which allow her to emphasize on specific aspects of her argument. For example, when she uses the diacope in “It was we, the people; not we the white male citizens; nor yet we, the male citizens; but we, the whole people, who formed the Union” she stresses on the fact that it was not only men who established the country and that women also played a large role in that, thus showing that they should be more equal. At the same time, by using the personal pronoun “we” Anthony makes the audience put themselves in the situation and think of themselves as the ones who are rejecting; which in this case are the ones who are put in the wrong throughout the speech. This would make the audience feel bad about themselves, which creates a tone of sorrow throughout the text, especially due to the early positioning of this statement in the speech.

Anthony also portrays some anger through her speech which also leads to it being more powerful. When she says “it is a downright mockery to talk to women of their enjoyment of the blessings of liberty” she creates a juxtaposition of the “blessings of liberty” and not just a mockery, but a “downright mockery.” By juxtaposing these two ideas, she creates a stark contrast between them, which allows people to more clearly comprehend her point; that women are not entirely free unless they can vote. The use of the word “downright” right before “mockery” also gives a strong emphasis to this negative word. The fact that these words are also placed towards the beginning of the sentence set a tone of ire for the rest of the sentence, which allows this important part of the speech, which contains an allusion to the right to vote at the end when she refers to “the ballot” (which is also further emphasized by a pause), to come across effectively and get her point across.

She also further creates a tone of ire with a deliberate accusation towards the higher class population of that time, which were likely to be part of the target audience as well, since these people would tend to have higher levels of education. Towards the end of her fourth paragraph, Anthony says:

an oligarchy of wealth, where the right govern the poor. An oligarchy of learning, where the educated govern the ignorant, or even an oligarchy of race, where the Saxon rules over the African, might be endured; but this oligarchy of sex, which makes fathers, brothers, husband, sons, the oligarchs over the mother and sisters, the wife and daughters of every household—which ordains all men sovereigns, all women subjects, carries dissension, discord and rebellion into every home of the nation.

In this part of her speech, Anthony uses an anaphora by repeating the word “oligarchy” and changing the word after it; however, this is also combined with a climax (as in this context the “oligarchy of sex” would sound as more important than the rest, since it is the main topic of the speech, and thus the oligarchies are stated in an order that rises in importance) and a parallelism (due to the similar grammatical structure used immediately after each oligarchy) in order to strongly emphasize the idea that a sexual dictatorship is one of the worst things that can exist. By adding the conjunction “but” right before the “oligarchy of sex,” Anthony not only indicates that this case is different to the rest, but also produces a short pause that would give emphasis to what she says next. She then further emphasizes her point of the oligarchy of sex by using a metanoia and re-explaining her already-longer-than-the-rest explanation of the “oligarchy of sex.” Lastly she uses a list of three with three negative attributes that the “oligarchy of sex” brings forward at the very end when she says “carries dissension, discord and rebellion into every home of the nation” in order to further emphasize her point. By using the anaphora combined with the climax, Anthony creates a mood of ire by rising the relevance of the subject each time, thus starting from the audiences possibly uninterested starting mood and bringing them up with her speech. These other rhetorical devices used right after take advantage of this tone of ire that has been created and manage to transmit the message in a more effective way, thus getting it across much more effectively.

It is also important to note that the structure of Anthony’s speech makes the speech less ambiguous and allows her message to come across with clarity to the largest amount of people possible. Her introduction at the beginning sets the context of her speech and she then proceeds to present her main point of evidence for her argument, which is the citation from the Constitution. She then proceeds to develop her ideas in an effective way and closes with the rhetorical question which she says is “the only question left to be settled now [is]: Are women persons?” which she then proceeds to implicitly respond to, thus closing her speech by giving the impression that there is nothing else to cover and that she has therefore covered all of her points. This structure makes her speech extremely effective, since it allows people to follow a natural flow and thus not get lost in her thoughts. The conclusion is also extremely effective for the reasons previously stated. The speech is also rather short, which ensures that people will be able to keep their attention focused.

This speech is perhaps one of the best masterpieces ever written in the English language. The masterful use of rhetorical devices and an organized structure to convey her message in an effective way make the speech extremely powerful. The fact that Anthony was also able to target members of the male part of the population also makes this speech through her use of heavy logos also makes this speech even more effective. It is truly a wonder.